Hero of Memory

Fantastic! This shouldn't be free

potatoes are tasty

I'm not good at parkour but haha fun game nonetheless, however I felt no connection to Dragons or Dungeons! :)

contains death loops thanks to bad spawns

Nice concept! I liked throwing my "head", and the way the story was told through platforms. The "platforming" felt a bit unreliable though, and the enemies' hitboxes were a bit too big. I would go next to them and die. The music felt much darker than the rest of the mood. The dragon was funny and cool audiovisuals -wise, but I wish the actual fight was more challenging. The concept could easily be made into a longer experience. Good job!

Very cool prototype. I relate to the theme on a personal level - I am statistically prone to developing dementia, as it runs in the family. I have always strived to create a game that encaptures the loss of memory, and while this game is not quite that, it does deliver a similar message.

Aside from that, the gameplay was alright. I agree with another comment about feeling like I needed more checkpoints, but that is more of a shoving-it-under-the-bed solution to the actual problem. It's surprisingly likely how often I'd just fall off of things. Whether it is due to unclear hitboxes, the controls, or whatever, it would happen. And this where the lack of checkpoints would frustrate me; if you're not activating new words as you go, the game is pretty stale. So additional checkpoints could alleviate that, or finding a way to prevent unnecessary deaths.

But overall, I enjoyed the message and the boss fight was funny. Perhaps you could check out my game and give me equally honest feedback - because everyone can improve!

I finished the game. Pretty cool. I'm curious what happens if you don't collect all the @ symbols but not enough to restart the game.

I have one criticism:
There's a bit after "The light dim from lack of oxygen", "A s" then "nae" grouped together. This makes it impossible to proceed. The N and the E block the A. Previously, you could leap on to words out of order but I just fall thru "person".

Then I discovered you can throw your head with space. I don't remember that being a function because I hadn't used it til then. There's no instructions on the game's page either.

Very original concept and great execution. The slipperyness of the player character made the platforming a little frustrating for me, but on the balance, it was very good. I loved the semantic tie ins, like "down" and "push", but I think the dragon at the end would have been more effective in the abstract -- i.e. without approximating a particular shape. Check out the entry "Dragon Souls" for an example. 

Original idea in a polished format — good story, fluent mechanics, beautiful transitions and animations. You also nailed the overall atmosphere and the dot mechanics. They are very intuitive.

There should be more checkpoints, maybe after every sentence.
There is a small typo after the predators: "Use the tots."
It would be more comfortable to hit space to continue instead of enter because my finger is already over that key anyways.
I, up, down, and push mechanics are fun, maybe you should add more like these.
The difficulty curve is a little bit jagged, especially in the end.

To summarize, this was a pleasant experience. Good job!

"Run Game" (here in the browser) results in a black screen for  me.